killin
shootin
hittin
slappin
all in the words
of the gangsta
dont let me catch you
with a wangsta
or i will
pop yo ass
with my 9
in a blast
hitting up the scene, in my car and arms
never thought i would make it throught,
the body guards
hitting it up with the crew
living life how i should
nothing more than drugs and money
never wanted you
in the words
of the gangsta
neva let me catch you here
with mah women
or i will make yo tear
in half with my knife
then sprinkle some
SLICE SLICE SLICE
pancakes, i wanna get wit ya
take some pictures
like those iceys
and some candy too
i sell them rocks
how the masters do
dont get me wrong, but i can see
your lonley here
without me
i never ment, to hurt you
but the money. is worth more to me
than you.
see this slick
see this rhyme
rocking up and down the line
hit some rock
hit some roll
add a bit of beat
and here we goooo
i dont rap btw, just wanted to see
hahaha oh god
i dont even like rap
i thought any half brained person could do it
anyway
i enjoyed reading them comments
hahaha thanks all, made me laugh:P
honestly as a rap fan its terrible :S
April 11th, 2010 at 2:06 pm
woah you’re good. i might see you haveing a new album nextime!
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April 11th, 2010 at 2:32 pm
lmao.
Make this your first… and last.
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April 11th, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Of course not, rap is sh*t.
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April 11th, 2010 at 3:36 pm
i couldn’t do what you just did, so i give you props on that…….
it does suck though
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April 11th, 2010 at 4:21 pm
i think i just had a heart attack
i cant breathe
omg
how can someone make such a crappy song
excuse me i have to go throw up
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no offense my opinion
so dont do any thumbs down or ill give u guys thumbs down too
April 11th, 2010 at 4:50 pm
Nah it sucks! Its better than anything 50 cent ever did though.
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April 11th, 2010 at 5:26 pm
honestly as a rap fan its terrible :S
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April 11th, 2010 at 6:11 pm
It doesnt make sense to me..
Yo yo homie bang bang mother f*cker .. Peace out.
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April 11th, 2010 at 6:44 pm
Try recording a freestyle. The deal is… Bust one for about ten minutes. Add time to stay with music cause you might lose it if you don’t. Just do it whenever you feel like it. I got wasted one night, mad at my bf and sang a crazy blues rap in the tub, till I realized I really felt that way. (Then I left my bf
) To rap well, sing the blues all the time, about everything you do from making coffee to thugging. You’ll hear a great rhyme before you realize you said it 
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April 11th, 2010 at 7:17 pm
Are you kidding me? what do you take hip-hop for…
Leave the rap writing to people who actually have thought in their writing
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April 11th, 2010 at 7:23 pm
Awful.
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